Saturday, 27 June 2009

some notes on the light wraps you HW

The soul- The light wraps you in its mortal flame. – this human love, that he wants to protect her.
Abstracted pale mourner, standing that way
against the old propellers of the twighlight - after the sun set becoming darker
that revolves around you. – the time goes on so she is getting older so the propellers symbolises her life how it’s forever changing as she is getting older.

Speechless, my friend, - that he is speechless that she has gone alone that she will fight on her own.
alone in the loneliness of this hour of the dead – no one around she is on her own.
and filled with the lives of fire, - fire can cause pain and suffering but then it can rebuild things, so maybe she has had suffering in her life and now thinks are getting better.
pure heir of the ruined day.

A bough of fruit falls from the sun on your dark garment.
The great roots of night – that something has been left a stain of him on her she can not get it off, religion maybe Adam & Eve with the fruit.
grow suddenly from your soul,
and the things that hide in you come out again – giving birth
so that a blue and palled people
your newly born, takes nourishment. – the baby will take its place in your life it will leave you with some joy, you can hide your pain.

Oh magnificent and fecund and magnetic slave
of the circle that moves in turn through black and gold:
rise, lead and possess a creation
so rich in life that its flowers - beautiful, joyful,eligant
perish and it is full of sadness. –
that black and gold are two very designative colours, you could say that at the beginning of the poem it’s the colour back where she is lonely and has no one, towards the end of the poem it’s the colour gold where she gives birth, she has a baby joy in her life. Or you could say its her feelings that she is happy at the end when she is alone with her baby.
“that its flowers perish and it is full of sadness” – that its flowers that leave your mark when you are dead, when you die people will leave flowers on your grave so suggesting that the flowers perish to sadness when someone dies.

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